Thinglink about seas/oceans

Kia ora

This is an activity we did using the Thinglink app. This is the second time I have made something using Thinglink so I hope someone will give me some feedback.

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greats and grands poem

Hello my name is lukas and I am going to show you a new leaning thing could thingThink here is a peom about greats and grands. Here it is.

Mt Reapehu google draw

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to draw Mt Ruapehu using Google Draw.

Something I think I have done well  was my outline of my mountain.
Next time I could improve by making the chairlift look more real.

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Thank you letter to Mum and Dad

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write  a thank you letter.

Something I think I have done well  is the punctuation but I got some help from the teacher.

Next time I think I could improve by doing the whole thing by myself.

Ka kite ano

7 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Mum and Dad

Thank you for letting me go on the ski trip. Skiing is amazing and I hope we can go again another time.

Love from

Lukas

Taniwha Art

Hello
 Today I'm showing you my taniwha  picture. Here it is.

Writing Challenge

Hi today we were given free choose of writing we had 20 mins to do a story about any thing we want.

I wold prefer to write some thing we want to do than the teacher telling us what to write about because some times we don't have any ideas.

Lukas' Copy

"Yay" i yell it's the week ends its saturday tmie for rugby i thro my gear in the bag "time to go" my dad yelles. I jump in the car pumped and energized. "were here" my dad yelles i put my rugby jersy on and my mouth gurd. I get on the field "try" yells the coach "yuss" i yell the kick off was done the oposite team was running at me i smash the kid in the tackec i stell the ball and pass it to Neco. He was off untill the tackle i run the ball at the oposishon i score a try my team cherrs for me i do the kick off i kick it in to the goal line Neco just missed the try. But that was all right. The other team did the 22 he kick it out. So we did the line out we run for the try and we got it and we won.  I went in for prize giving and i gat paer of the day and the coach said i can trail for the under 10s reps.

Freedom Edit

Buddy Edit.

"Yay" i yell it's the week ends its Saturday time for rugby I threw my gear in the bag "time to go" my dad yelled. I jump in the car pumped and energised. "were here" my dad yelled i put my rugby jersey on and my mouth guard. I get on the field "try" yells the coach "Yuss" i yell the kick off was done the opposite team was running at me I smash the kid in the tackle i stoll the ball and pass it to Neco. He was off until the tackle i run the ball at the opposition i score a try my team cheers for me i do the kick off i kick it in to the goal line Neco just missed the try. But that was all right. The other team did the 22 he kick it out. So we did the line out we run for the try and we got it and we won.  I went in for prize giving and I get player of the day and the coach said i can trail for the under 10s reps.

Hoildays

Hi my name is Lukas and today I'm showing you my story of the holidays
here it is