Narrative

HUNTED

by Lukas Barlow

One night a full moon was shining as bright as a light, lighting up the  jungle. Suddenly a jungle boy appears from behind the trees. He was hungry. He smells chicken. He goes for it but he falls in a trap. The man flashes a camera to make him blind so he had time to tie him upside down.  The hunter got the wishbone and they snapped it together. The boy won. He used the broken wishbone to unlock the padlock to  escape. The hunter was in a little hut talking to the president. When he came  out the boy was gone. He looked for him. The boy came to a hole just as the man reached him.  The boy sees the camera and blinds him. The boy runs into a cage and slips out of the bars but the hunter smashes into the cage bars and gets knocked out. The other boys come to sing and eat him alive!

My First Narrative

The Beast

One day Tae, Mitchel and I were fishing in the yacht. I caught a shark. I couldn't pull the shark in. It lead us onto an island. It was sandy, dry and hot. The island was really peaceful until… one day a big, black, strong, hairy beast with long tusks came charging at us, to eat us alive.  Quickly we climbed up the tree with lots of coconuts so we could survive from the beast. We made a tree house in the tree and feasted on coconuts.

One day we ran out of coconuts and we were hungry!!  “Mitchel, do you have any meat?” I yelled. “Yes,” yelled Mitchel. “Ok, throw it over to the tree stump,” I yelled. Tae handed me my sword. “I am going to kill the beast,” I exclaimed.  I jumped at the beast and killed it. We survived on meat for days until one day we signaled out to a helicopter and they rescued us. We lived happily, rich in the city, in a hotel!!!!!!!!