This is an example of my adverb writing.
Whoosh!! The strong warm wind blows as I slowly stroll down the street. I hear my new shoes tapping on the smooth metal. Tip tap tip tap. Slowly I walk to get a yummy vanilla ice-cream! I feel relaxed in the smooth air. Patiently I wait to get an ice-cream to cool me off!
I .enjoyed your writing Lukas. I see you are using your creativity by using drawing to support what you are communicating. Keep up the good work mate.
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