Lukas's narrative

Hello today im showing you my narrative writing about my mythical creature. Here it is.

Once upon a time in a majestic castle in Paris, there was a strong and handsome God named Lukas Barlow with strength like Hercules and talents like a star rugby player. Lukas could control the weather, shape shift, and move hills and mountains. He had a pet named Cyclos,Lukas’s pet was a bird with three heads and Maori tattoos. Cyclos liked to light fires to tell its family he’s alive. He could make black holes and shoot laser beams.

Cyclos and Lukas lived happily until they had a disagreement. They wouldn’t work together and they became foes against each other. Lukas would not make it sunny so Cyclos could light fires to tell his family he was alive.  Cyclos’s family lived on a planet way past the 7th planet from the sun. Cyclos was so mad that he made a black hole on Earth and flew back to his own planet, it took a light year to get to his planet. However, there were two pokemon called Gardevoir and Arceus who came from planet Pokemon. Gardevoir could make black holes and Arceus could bring back life to planets. So Gardevoir made a black hole on Cycloses planet. Cyclos managed to escape from his planet and attack Gardevoir and they had a big battle. Gardevoir used hyper beams  on Cyclos and one nearly shot him.  Cyclos used his laser beam and Cyclos won.  He flew as fast as a hawk to Arceus and challenged him. Arceus won and Cyclos died. Lukas flew to Cyclos’s planet and used a revive on Gardevoir and she woke up. Lukas also used a hyper potion on her and Gardevoir was fully healed.  Then another pokemon came, from the pokemon planet, it was Houndoom.   He was a  guard dog pokemon and Lukas realised he could be a replacement for Cyclos. He became Lukas’s new pet. Houndoom flew around looking for earth.  Then Arceus remembered that he had to make earth again and so he did. Houndoom flew to Lukas’s castle and made him a dog kennel.

Finally Lukas flew back to Earth, back to Paris and found Houndoom sleeping in a kennel that was not there before. Arceus and Gardevoir flew back to the Pokemon planet. And Lukas never seen Gardevoir and Arceus ever again. The end