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Wednesday, 30 August 2017

5 Senses

Kia ora bloggers
These last few days we have been working on our five senses. We had to find a photo and describe it using our five senses. Mine was an old house. See if you can find out what I might be describing.



As I walk in here, my hand smears the cold blood on the wall. The shattered glass on the ground is cutting my feet. The dust coming from every direction attacks my nose. I see ripped curtains swaying from side to side, making an ehhhhhh sound. The beds look like bears have been sleeping on them. It looks like someone tried to burn the place down.  

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Lukas,

    What an eerie place you have described! I particularly liked your simile about the beds looking like bears had slept on them - very clever. I don't think I'd like to explore this place, what about you?

    Miss M

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